Monday, June 6, 2011

Crush




















I see you, though you’re not really there
I feel your touch as you caress my hair
I feel your body entwine with mine
I dream of you and lose the time
I feel your arms with love surround me
Love must be blind, for I cannot see
Your voice, it wakes inside of me
I startle, and look around to see
“Your love for me is the best I’ve known”
You have my heart, but I’m forever alone…
-by me

(I made this up in like 10 minutes, so please forgive how bad it sucks)
Originally written 5/31/11
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6 comments:

  1. KarinaJune 6, 2011 at 2:28 PM

    You came up with this in 10mins?!

    It's really good :-)

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  2. gothbutterflyJune 6, 2011 at 5:18 PM

    Yep, 10 minutes...that's how I've always come up with my poems, 5-20 minutes...n thanks so much!

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  3. HwnInPAJune 6, 2011 at 8:42 PM

    Wow, thats very impressive. 10 minutes eh? Damn girl, very good!

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  4. gothbutterflyJune 6, 2011 at 8:58 PM

    Thanks!!

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  5. KarinaJune 7, 2011 at 12:59 AM

    I am such a slow writer - I spend more time thinking than writing!

    I never know how to start

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  6. gothbutterflyJune 7, 2011 at 1:46 AM

    It all starts with a lil thought for me...I write it down n go from there...

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